Yessir?

by Mask By The Moon

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I look at a very confused Rosaline and step past all the people, her following behind, only because there’s not room for a two-person horizontal line. Well, we’ve been training for this for a while now. We should be ready.

But every conscious cell in my body screamed with nervousness. And my neck was sore from nodding so much.

It’s not easy beaing the lowest rank.

But we continued nodding to higher ranks, all the way to the man who had yelled at us from across the room. Keeping perfect posture, Rosaline stepped beside me.

“Yessir?” we inquired simultaneously.

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  1. Yessir?

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ooh, I like it. =)
    LoA

  2. Yessir?

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    must be tough being the lowest rank, sore from head nodding and all the yes sirs and taking orders..

  3. Yessir?

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nicely done – liked the point of view of the main character & how you captured the emotion of the moment.

  4. Yessir?

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 2 months ago

    oooo im gonna go read the sequel!

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