The sacrificial victim

by Ridcully Calvert

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. The sacrificial victim

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Really exciting and horrific. Great descriptions as well, very terrifying.

  2. The sacrificial victim

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m beyond impressed that you have not only crafted a masterfully suspenseful story, but also managed to keep it within the constraints of the challenge. This has my vote!
    LoA

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    Grotesque! Painfully detailed, and crafted. (Err, was it painful to write?) I think I meant well-crafted. LOL ! I enjoyed it, once my stomach stopped empathizing in agony with the sacrificial protagonist!
    LoA

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    Tarmaie's Buddy Icon Tarmaie

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Umm, actually the 4th sentence has the same number of words as the 3rd. I’m sorry, I wouldn’t have noticed but this was such a good normal ficlet that I got confused. lol. Anyhooser it’s cool that you managed a story like this within the limits of the challenge.

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    Tarmaie's Buddy Icon Tarmaie

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Got confused and started to count, I meant…. whatever

  6. The sacrificial victim

    Ridcully Calvert's Buddy Icon Ridcully Calvert

    Posted 2 months ago

    Well spotted Tarmaie, I fixed it.

  7. The sacrificial victim

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 2 months ago

    Oh, I love how you wove this into an actual little story (formatting-wise, I mean). Nice spooky detail, and great job following the guidelines.

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