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You have always loved me (One More Word Challenge Entry) Nirvana!!!

by Dreamer

Crap.
I sighed. He was warm. But that doesn’t help. I need to think clearly. But when he’s near I can’t.Which is why I am dumping him. It’s not because he’s terribly flawed or something. It’s because nothing feels real when he is close. It’s because I can’t control myself when he touches me. I have this problem: I need to be in control. It’s not like I’m a control freak, I just need something solid.Something solid that I can hold onto that I know will not change. Because when I’m with him I lose my sanity and all my self control. My friends say it must be because I love him, but that can’t be it. Maybe this sounds weird, but it’s like he has cast some sanity-losing spell on me. It is uncanny how much he affects everything I think and do. I’ve always been a good girl, but when he touches me I want to go all the way.
I look up at him, “Victor, please believe me, I can not do this anymore; I don’t love you.”
He shakes his head quietly, “You have always loved me, even from the begining; you are simply scared.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. You have always loved me (One More Word Challenge Entry) Nirvana!!!

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 7 months ago

    sigh… I wanted a more dramatic last line but this was all I could do. I hope I didn’t lost count somewhere. oh well, I hope you enjoy it anyway!

  2. You have always loved me (One More Word Challenge Entry) Nirvana!!!

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    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love that last line! Very cute. =)
    LoA

  3. You have always loved me (One More Word Challenge Entry) Nirvana!!!

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    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the use of the challenge to tell a tale of inner-conflict. Very relatable, I think.

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