bright

by Jayme Meiram

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falling
crashing
burning bright

streaking
cutting
slicing the night

dreaming
wondering
wishing for you

stretching
reaching
bleeding for truth

pleading
begging
calling my dreams

won’t you
can’t you
come home to me?

screaming
yelling
remembering our fight

leaving me
falling
crashing
burning bright

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    [pens&feathers]'s Buddy Icon [pens&feathers]

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the rhythm of this. Lovely poem.

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    kells' Buddy Icon kells

    Posted 4 months ago

    Gorgeous! I was trying to use that photograph, but couldn’t come up with anything half as good as that.

    I love how it’s so minimal, and yet you can draw so much of a scene from just those few lines.

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    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted 4 months ago

    I really like this. It sounds like a typical falling star poem, but then you throw in some different things. Very emotive.

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    Jayme Meiram's Buddy Icon Jayme Meiram

    Posted 4 months ago

    thanks so much!

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    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted 7 days ago

    I really like this! It does sound like your typical falling star poem, but you added emotions and I’m sure anyone who read this can relate! Great job!

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