Some Deep Conversation

by thebetweenspace

“Turn off your lights and slow down,” I instructed.

“Whatever, nancy,” Mendez replied, slowing the car to a stop moments later.

He turned out to be a real boy scout. He opened the heavy trunk he had forced me to load, with much difficulty, into the mini cooper.

“Oh, my god.” I doubled over in laughter. “You’re such a weirdo.”

Mendez shrugged, carefully arranging a rope, two black ski masks, black fatigues, binoculars, a hunting knife and a nearly life-sized, and very crudely painted, portrait of Jodi.

“And you call me nancy-boy,” I mocked.

“What’re you waiting for?” he tossed me my fatigues, a menacing threat in his eyes. “Get dressed.”

We crawled commando-style, pausing frequently to argue. When we got to a good vantage point, he reached for the binoculars.

“Uh-oh,” Mendez reported. “This isn’t good. I can read lips and I know exactly what they’re saying.”

“What’re they saying?”

“See for yourself.”

Indeed, they were in some deep conversation. Only without words. They were making out.

Comments

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  1. Some Deep Conversation

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This was so funny! And I loved the nearly life-sized, and very crudely painted, portrait of Jodi. Classic.
    I’ll sequel later this afternoon. I have a faculty meeting after work. :\
    LoA

  2. Some Deep Conversation

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    OK, just wrote a sequel. I’m excited to see where this goes next.

  3. Some Deep Conversation

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The life-size crudely painted portrait has its genesis point. (One of my favorite quirky characterizations in the series). THX later expounds on how it speaks volumes about the character.

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    NightMaiden's Buddy Icon NightMaiden

    Posted 4 months ago

    Yikes! Take that Mendez!

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