Mama Said Knock You Out!

by thebetweenspace

I walked inside my room dreading having to face Tom. Surprisingly, considering how late it was, Tom was lying on his bed talking on the phone. How odd. I wondered if something was wrong? Death in the family? I braced myself for the worst.

“No, I love you more.” Tom rolled his eyes, motioned for me to sit down. “You’re so adorable. That’s why,” he let out in a girly voice.

Had he been love bitten? I couldn’t bear the thought.

“Okay, sleep well. Know that you’re safe and I’ll be guarding you even in your dreams. Good night.”

He ended the call.

I waited, not knowing what to say. Part of me wanted to ask him if the plan was still in effect, or if he’d actually fallen for Jodi. The rest of me wanted to plead for forgiveness after blindly following stupid Mendez.

“So, Jordan.” Tom said. “What the hell was that all about?”

Mendezfoundout! ButIdidn’tknowhefoundout! AndIthoughtweweregoingtospy! Notgetintoafight!

“Slow down, buddy. I already assumed that. I meant why did you make me knock you out?”

Comments

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  1. Mama Said Knock You Out!

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great last line. I’m writing a sequel right now…

  2. Mama Said Knock You Out!

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    There’s your sequel.

  3. Mama Said Knock You Out!

    uselessness' Buddy Icon uselessness

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Okay, so I’ve been passively following this series and I’ve got to say that Tom’s side of the phone conversation is probably the funniest thing I’ve ever read on Ficlets. Not to mention the “girly voice” tag… :-P
    LoA

  4. Mama Said Knock You Out!

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    LOL ! I guess it’s an honorable distinction to be the 1st to use the “girly voice” tag. That made my day.

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