Something to say. (This is just to say...{The apology Challange})

by Sailor Emo

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This is just to say
I’m sorry that I had to leave you when I wasn’t strong enough to stay.
This is just to say
I’m sorry that I lied to you when I went away.
This is just to say
I still love you and, if you will take me, I will come back today.
This is just to say
if you moved on, although it will kill me to see, it’s ok.
This is just to say
I’m sorry.
In my heart for you , there will allways be a place.
That was something that I just had to say.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Something to say. (This is just to say...{The apology Challange})

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    Sad and beautiful at the same time. Very lyrical, too.
    LoA

  2. Something to say. (This is just to say...{The apology Challange})

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    I like the line “it will kill me to see” because it is hard to accept that someone you love could now love someone else. :)
    LoA

  3. Something to say. (This is just to say...{The apology Challange})

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    Yes, lyrical is the best way to describe it. I felt like I was listening to a song as I read through it. Maybe someday we’ll hear an expanded version of it on the radio.

  4. Something to say. (This is just to say...{The apology Challange})

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 2 months ago

    awwww… thanx blushes

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