Is It Really You?

by More Ways Than One

I feel like I know you
Same eyes
Same hair
Same face
But is it really you?

The you I know
Comes with laughter
With stupidity
That only we understand

But this you
Comes with tired eyes
With quiet words
I can’t understand

I feel like I know you
But is it really you?

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  1. Is It Really You?

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this is really good keegan. um, yah, just, yah, really good.
    =]

  2. Is It Really You?

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sorry about the the yah stuff…

  3. Is It Really You?

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Ah, nice description of depression, maybe? Something like that. Did you miss an ‘I’ in that first line?

  4. Is It Really You?

    ACORN's Buddy Icon ACORN

    Posted 4 months ago

    YAH this is good

  5. Is It Really You?

    ACORN's Buddy Icon ACORN

    Posted 4 months ago

    YAH this is good

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