John in Hell

by Eckhouse

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. John in Hell

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Don’t even know what to say. Wow.

  2. John in Hell

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    It goes from being sarcastic and not completely serious (Exhibit “A” : first paragraph) to being horrifyingly real very suddenly. I want to keep reading. (Hint, hint.)
    LoA

  3. John in Hell

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 4 months ago

    There shall be more. For once, I’ve started something with an idea of how to keep going with it.

  4. John in Hell

    Melia's Buddy Icon Melia

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Intriguing. I was drawn in in by your title and the story did not disappoint. I liked how the story made me feel as disoriented as John by not quite disclosing who is speaking to him, and how he still felt dread despite no nervous system. Looking forward to more.
    LoA

  5. John in Hell

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 4 months ago

    An entertaining read – thank God my own nervous system is just fine! Can’t imagine life without one. This is creative and fun. Thanks for sharing.

  6. John in Hell

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great setting and dilemma, and he did not do what I expected. Nice job surprising me. I think I have a tendency to over-identify with my characters and make them fit into the mold of some paragon of archaic virtue. You’ve inspired me to make a less-than-noble character! Thanks.

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