Feel the Beat

by MissJonas1492

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Feel the Beat

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    So what happens next? Honestly, if the 2 main characters both get laid the I’m bored already. Create some sexual tension. Make the girl jewish and the boy muslim or something.

  2. Feel the Beat

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this is really good! I’m glad that I caught it b4 it was off of the boards!!ps:I don’t think that it needs any more “sexual tension”, its 5 star worhty

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