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A Bit Of A Shock

In fact, I wiped the floor with both of them. I was the last man standing. They were so broken and bruised that Jodi was beside herself. “Look at you,” she said, a demonic, enticing smile on her face. She grabbed my biceps, and brushed her hands over my body. “Sexy boy.”

I almost couldn’t resist her toxic and entirely captivating aura. The key word. Almost. “Jodi, I want to thank you for something.”

“And what’s that my wittle Jordie-Wordie?” Jodi said.

“I want to thank you for helping me realize that I’m exactly who I want to be. And I want to thank you for helping me learn to respect myself.”

“What else is there for a charming young girl to do?” Jodi flirted, grabbing my hand. And we walked back to my room. “The game is over, Jordan. I choose you. You are my champion.”

“Then, this is gonna come as a bit of a shock,” I said, venomously. “I said earlier that I wanted to thank you for helping me learn to respect myself. Well, that’s the thing. I respect myself enough to crush your sorry ass right here.”

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emma jo_234
Posted 3 months ago

Okay. I just read this series all the way through and I love it to pieces. This plot is hilARious!!! This characters are great. I love how you kept the reader guessing. Fabulous! Sequel!
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uselessness
Posted 3 months ago

Sequeled! The story’s pretty much wound up at this point, with just a couple loose ends that deserve a nice finish. :-) What a fun series this has been! Glad I could be a part of it.
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Ana Cristina
Posted 3 months ago

Wow, a new and … vindictive Jordan? Or is that Jordie Wordie? LOL . Great work, as usual from you.
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THX 0477
Posted 3 months ago

Yes! Hooray for him, resisting that primal urge. I love a hero.
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Ana Cristina
Posted 3 months ago

I wrote another sequel to uselessness’s last part. Sad that this is ending!
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You Know You Love Mee!
Posted 2 months ago

OOOOOH ..

That toast was BURNEDDD .
:]]

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NightMaiden
Posted 2 months ago

Yeah, Jordan! Wake up and smell the roses! Throw Jodi out the window!
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Apple
Posted 2 months ago

YAY JORDAN !!
Key word. Almost. love it!