We Are Here

by Laine P. Grey

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I clung to his feathers and whispered in his ear: Take me to heaven.

He flew to the clouds and turned to me. We are here.

I went to the spaceship and whispered in its ear: Take me to heaven.

He flew to the stars and turned to me. We are here.

I opened my book and whispered in its ear: Take me to heaven.

With a sigh, it opened its pages. We are here.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. We Are Here

    Kitty Pom-Pom's Buddy Icon Kitty Pom-Pom

    Posted 16 days ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this story a lot! Nice inspiration!

  2. We Are Here

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 16 days ago

    Oh, ,that was lovely, really lovely. I kid of like the idea of this endless search for heaven, experiencing it through the eyes of others, and going right on searching. At least, that’s what I took from it.

  3. We Are Here

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 16 days ago

    Very nice repetition. Basically, a short, sweet little ficlet. I also like your comparison between the three seemingly unrelated things.

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