A cloud of Happyness

by Blusparrow

Everything happened so fast that everything felt so cloudy to Faith. She walked with a spring in her step in a big grin on her face. I got the guy! Yes!. She reaches their spot, only to find Mia and Victoria are not there. She gets her phone out and texted Victoria:

guess what?

Victoria: what?
Faith: What is the best thing that could happen between ne and Ethan?
Victoria: OMG ! he asked you out! i am so happy for you! what day is it?
Faith: friday.
Victoria: i thought you and i were going to hang out on friday.
Faith: omg ur right. i could cancel.
Victoria: nahhh i could just help you get ready for ur big date. ur going to be one hot girl when were done wit ya.

Faith laughed. Victoria was here bestest friend of all of them. She knew Faith very well.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. A cloud of Happyness

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    Ever since I have seen Pursuit of Happyness I always but a Y in happyness. My title wasn’t an accident, I wanted it that way.
    LoA

  2. A cloud of Happyness

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    Ever since I have seen Pursuit of Happyness I always but a Y in happyness. My title wasn’t an accident, I wanted it that way.
    LoA

  3. A cloud of Happyness

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    Ever since I have seen Pursuit of Happyness I always but a Y in happyness. My title wasn’t an accident, I wanted it that way.
    LoA

  4. A cloud of Happyness

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Happyness makes more sense, English is such a difficult biaatch sometimes, excuse my portugese. This is a cute story. I like how the dialogue is text—that’s original. I just got my cell phone bill and my trexts are out of control, lol. A few grammar issues in the first paragraph but I’ll leave that up to your teacher to wrinkle her brow over.

  5. A cloud of Happyness

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    Totally agree with Tad. Lovw the text convo….must read the sequel.
    LoA

  6. A cloud of Happyness

    howhardlifeis♥'s Buddy Icon howhardlifeis♥

    Posted 2 months ago

    aww cute….reading on..

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