Only Half a Pyramid (One More Word Challenge)

by Stovohobo

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“Hello.”

“Hello, slave.”

“Why’ve you come?”

“Heard about a problem…?”

“No, no problem – all good.”

“Well, then, get back to work.”

“Will do, Master Imhotep, right away, sir.”

“Wait – there is something wrong with this pyramid…”

“Of course not, nothing wrong at all with it!”

“Ah, I see the problem: it’s only half a pyramid!”

“Er, can’t you just see the beautiful triangle it makes, though?”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Only Half a Pyramid (One More Word Challenge)

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 14 days ago

    Short. Cheap. Whatever.
    But do you get the joke? I made a joke!

  2. Only Half a Pyramid (One More Word Challenge)

    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted 14 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice job, working on the shape of the text (more or less) for your One More Word Ficlet.

  3. Only Half a Pyramid (One More Word Challenge)

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 14 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Cute. It might be cheap, and it might be only half a pyramid, but at least the dialogue’s fast and funny. Nicely done.
    LoA

  4. Only Half a Pyramid (One More Word Challenge)

    Jala's Buddy Icon Jala

    Posted 14 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it. Very cool.

  5. Only Half a Pyramid (One More Word Challenge)

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 14 days ago

    Somebody’s going to be killed…or at least severely flogged. Funny, with a sort of Monty Python feel to it.
    LoA

  6. Only Half a Pyramid (One More Word Challenge)

    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 14 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Aha! i get it… nice lol

  7. Only Half a Pyramid (One More Word Challenge)

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 14 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nicely shaped joke.

  8. Only Half a Pyramid (One More Word Challenge)

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 14 days ago

    Hehe Pwetty piwamed!!

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