Watch The TIde Drift Downward

by More Ways Than One

All I can do is sit here and watch the tide drift downward. It’s magnificent blue takes my breath away. I love how this place looks after a storm. It has a certain sparkle to it.

I just want to dive. Be part of it’s perfection. But the sign is my only barrier keeping me from it’s majesty. All I can do is sit here and watch the tide drift downward.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Watch The TIde Drift Downward

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i love it, despite its shortness
    mostly because of the first and last line, how its the same.

  2. Watch The TIde Drift Downward

    Mycroft's Buddy Icon Mycroft

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Don’t know whether you’re familiar with Biblical writing styles, but you’ve very nearly got a “chiastic structure”:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chiastic_structure going on here. Very nice little story, gets a lot done with very few words.

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