Trick or Treat

by Grinning Sisyphus

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Pretty twisted funny take on the ‘trick’ aspect of trick or treat. One typo, though. I think you meant hanging temptingly over the bubbling cauldron in the back. As opposed to handing.

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    Grinning Sisyphus' Buddy Icon Grinning Sisyphus

    Posted 5 months ago

    Thanks. I’ve fixed that.

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    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 5 months ago

    Hehehe…

    Sounds like something I would do on Halloween….

    Great ficlet!

    Kinda makes me scared to go trick or treating again…

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    Valley Fey/Pinprick's Buddy Icon Valley Fey/Pinprick

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Simply awesome.
    LoA

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    You Know You Love Mee!'s Buddy Icon You Know You Love Mee!

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    confused….
    his head dropped into the pot??
    :]]]
    great story though..
    :]]

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    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 5 months ago

    I’m a bit confused too…but cool!

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    Grinning Sisyphus' Buddy Icon Grinning Sisyphus

    Posted 5 months ago

    Sorry for the confusion. I plead “first try.” :) When I saw the picture, it looked like tiny heads to me. The combination of the colors suggested Halloween. I decided to write about someone who makes candy by decapitating trick or treaters who are too old to be trick or treating. Given how short Ficlets are, I deliberately chose to omit any description or discussion of how they were decapitated, but I encourage anyone to come up with something and add it on. Thanks for all the comments!

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