The Following Ficlet Takes Place Between 3:00 PM and 4:00 PM

by thebetweenspace

Interior. Dimly lit room, within an abandoned warehouse. Jason wakes up, surveying his surroundings. Panic does not set in. He slowly calculates his odds of escape. And waits for the opportune moment.

“Looks like he’s starting to stir,” Guillermo commented.

“Then, it’s time,” Marcos said. “Victor get me Dr. Reeves on the phone. I think we’ve waited long enough.”

“What am I your secretary now?” Victor said, cooly.

“Just do it!”

“Okay, okay.” Victor dialed the number and handed the phone to Marcos, subserviently, but not merrily.

“Hello,” Dr. Reeves answered.

“Dr. Reeves, we have somebody here who’d like to say something.”

“Do I know you? What’s this all about?”

Marcos handed Jason the phone. “Say hi to daddy, Jason.”

“Bauer!” Jason barked into the phone.

“For God sakes, son. Would you stop playing that ridiculous game. I thought you were really in trouble for a second. Tell mom I’ll be late for supper.”

With that, he hung up the phone. Clearly this was going to be tougher than they’d thought.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Following Ficlet Takes Place Between 3:00 PM and 4:00 PM

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great touch with the bickering bad guys, and the defiantly delusional protagonist. This boy is really going to get hurt…which he may actually appreciate for the sake of realism.

  2. The Following Ficlet Takes Place Between 3:00 PM and 4:00 PM

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The protagonist is my favorite part of this series! This is great stuff, very gripping.
    LoA

  3. The Following Ficlet Takes Place Between 3:00 PM and 4:00 PM

    BARomero's Buddy Icon BARomero

    Posted 4 months ago

    What if O. Henry wrote 24? This is really fun to read.

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