White Pain (Twilight Challenge)

by Laine P. Grey

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I was too stunned to feel the pain. I couldn’t breathe yet. What had led to this defining moment? How had life and death nearly collided to the point where it was almost insufferable?
I asked myself these questions as I watched him. He looked more hurt than I did; and I was the one with a gash running across my back. I’m sorry. His eyes whispered each time he worked up enough courage to look at me. Secretly, I forgave him. Secretly, I understood all of this. Secretly, I wanted to hate him. But I couldn’t.
For all of his strength, he looked so helpless. So weak. So…childlike.
Then, the pain came. The white pain. It took everything in me to keep from crying out, because I knew that would only hurt him more.

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  1. White Pain (Twilight Challenge)

    Laine P. Grey's Buddy Icon Laine P. Grey

    Posted 11 days ago

    I know it technically didn’t have to be Twilight based, but it’s a piece of what I felt that Emily was feeling after Sam ripped up her back…. Or, it could be non-Twilight people. Either way.

  2. White Pain (Twilight Challenge)

    You Know You Love Mee!'s Buddy Icon You Know You Love Mee!

    Posted 11 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oooh.
    this reminds me sooooo much of something that steaphnie myers would actually write… soo GREAT job here.
    :]]

  3. White Pain (Twilight Challenge)

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 11 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That would be a great spin off! I like where you went with this.

  4. White Pain (Twilight Challenge)

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 11 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i agree with jenunique, i like where you went with this. it’s so… real
    great job depicting what they were feeling
    awesome

  5. White Pain (Twilight Challenge)

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 10 days ago

    O.O! WOW !!!! I lovce this!!!! And I am being biased but WOW !!! ( I love Twilight too much lol)
    This is great!

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