The Kiss

by Mrs. Robinson

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voices lower…whisper
arms welcome….embrace
eyes close
noses brush
lips reach out, part

then…touch

gently

softly

tongues meet…wet
dance across each other

twist

roll

taste

move…in…out

probe

the kiss is warm

slow

discovering

charting

Bodies shift
Breath quickens
Arms tighten
Fingers spread

Lips Firm
Harden

Tongues Push
Deeper

Reach

Want

Ask

Insist

Demand

Heads pull apart
Breathing…audible…gasping

A head bows
A forehead touches a nose
Pauses
A breath is sucked in

And lips rise

To meet lips again

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Mrs. Robinson's Buddy Icon Mrs. Robinson

    Posted 4 months ago

    Being very new to this forum, I was not sure about the “mature” rating. When in doubt, error on the safe side. Please provide feedback to me about that. Thanks

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    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 4 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    mm very well described kiss scene, grasping every bit of the sensation

  3. The Kiss

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 4 months ago

    That’s okay not to mark mature.

    But Oh, I love it!!

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is very seductive and intimate. You captured the moment well.
    LoA

  5. The Kiss

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 3 months ago

    it has a poetic feel to it. Every second is described with intensity

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