Love Him (Twilight Challenge)

by Freedom

“Tell me what you’re thinking” he whispered. His voice was unbelievably irresistible and I had to give in.

“I’m thinking we should take a break.” I squeezed my hazel eyes shut so I wouldn’t have to see the agony this was causing him, my seven month boyfriend. But I could still hear the torture in his voice.

“If you think that’s best. But I do have one question.”

“Yes.” I finally had to glaze into his depressing eyes. I finally had to feel his pain by looking into them.

“Is this about something I did or about Roger?”

“Michael, you know the answer to that.” I told him, begging him to just drop it so I could leave him to torment him with my break-up idea.

“No I don’t. Do you love Rogerson or me, Marie?”

“I love…him.” But this is not why I couldn’t look away. I couldn’t look away because as I turned to leave, Michael pulled me close, kissing my lips one last time. And it was like falling in love all over again. With him.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Love Him (Twilight Challenge)

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    There’s my stab at this challenge. It’s such a great challenge, but hopefully I don’t win. I didn’t feel like going all out on this because it seems like we are ripping apart Twilight and creating something else. But the challenge idea was completely amazing. Great job Sailor Emo. I love the Twilight series!
    :]:]:]:]

  2. Love Him (Twilight Challenge)

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 2 months ago

    Thanx! I love this one but it’s sad… SEQUEL ???? (That would be awesome!!!)
    Thanx for entering the Challange!!!

  3. Love Him (Twilight Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very cute! I loved it! =)
    LoA

  4. Love Him (Twilight Challenge)

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    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    cute and sad all in one! Nice line choice too.
    LoA

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