Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

by Blusparrow

“Hey Everyone! I have something very important to say so listen!” She shouts across people talking and waiting. She sees everyone staring at her and gets a little nervous. She clears her throat and thinks, Here goes nothing.

“None of you people probably know me but, I can’t take any of these rumors that I hear anymore. Some of them are just horrible. Is this how you guys really think of other people, or is it that you are to jealous of each other? The rumor that Alison slept with Jason is totally wrong and it ruined her life because of it. The rumor that Kate smokes crack is totally off because she is a total goody girl. The fact that Joe killed someone is like the stupidest thing I ever heard because he is actually a nice guy that would never hurt a fly. These are just some of them as you know. My question to you is if you hate hearing rumors about yourself so much then why do you do it to other people?”

People begin whispering to each other. My work here is done.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    Louise Madison's Buddy Icon Louise Madison

    Posted 2 months ago

    It is completely different from the other entries, but I love the originatlity. I love how even though she didn’t know anyone there, she felt that she had done her job. Wonderous entry. Thanks for competeing!

  2. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    “Hey everyone!” is definitely a 20th century “Hear ye!” LOL I think they should have been more surprised that she spoke up, because being the quiet one makes it that more dramatic. :)

  3. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, nice entry! =) I like that she went through with what she wanted to say even though she got nervous.
    LoA

  4. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    For some reason I pictured this in a school/university cafeteria. Just seems like the perfect setting. Nice job.

  5. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very well written. If only someone would be screaming that at the whole world.

  6. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    Mrs. Robinson's Buddy Icon Mrs. Robinson

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice job. I agree with jenunique, I pictured a high school cafeteria. (you misspelled the first word)

  7. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    Hey? Hey is spelt wrong? I am confused…
    LoA

  8. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    p.lauré's Buddy Icon p.lauré

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i think she ment Se is supposed to be She.

    i love this because it has to be the truest thing, people constantly talk about anything whether its true or not.

  9. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    aha! thanks!
    LoA

  10. Quiet Girl Lets it Out (Hear ye Challenge)

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 2 months ago

    This is great! Rumors can be so hurtful sometimes. I love how it’s the quiet girl who speaks up…go quiet girl! :-D
    LoA

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