Moving Forward

by partysprinkles

Her skirt lifted, flickered, billowed. Around her ankles the cascades of cotton expanded, receded, breathed. No more winter, no more nights accompanied by the lonely cackle of a dwindling hearth, no more frayed blankets and tattered garments, too loose to keep the warmth in or the cold out. Beyond these hills, this sparkling terrestrial floor that beamed bright and vivacious under the cool all-knowingness of the vast expansive sky, was hope. Her valise in tact, her hat secured with a steadfast intent on her head, she marched forward, letting her bare feet move freely over the wide open plains. It’s stranger now, this world, this gem of a country, nestled securely between her heart and her memories. Her chest overflowed, her love for the sky and the wind and the air ruptured forth, it’s passion finding no bounds to contain within. She crumpled, let her knees brace for the fall, and let her flushed cheek lay momentarily still on the coolness of the grass beneath. This country, this land, she loved it so.

Comments

  1. Moving Forward

    Valley Fey/Pinprick's Buddy Icon Valley Fey/Pinprick

    Posted 2 months ago

    Wow, this is amazing. Nothing else to be said, really.
    LoA

  2. Moving Forward

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    That was sweet. Nice description throughout with some fun hints and what the situation is that leads her to this walk in the countryside.
    LoA

  3. Moving Forward

    Andrew Mayfield's Buddy Icon Andrew Mayfield

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love the somewhat abstract references juxtaposed with the palpable vivid descriptions. Very nice.

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