A Life-Long Ache Begins Now [6-Word Story]

by Alexa ♥

It

would

have

been

a

boy . . .

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Life-Long Ache Begins Now [6-Word Story]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    Oooh, ouch, eek. Yep, that friggin’ hurts. So many maybes, so many possibilities. You slew me with that one. Now I have to go read something happy.

  2. A Life-Long Ache Begins Now [6-Word Story]

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The power of six simple words, very impressive and heartbreaking altogether at once.

  3. A Life-Long Ache Begins Now [6-Word Story]

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Amazing, how so much heartache can be injected into just six words. I love how you can interpret this in so many ways, although I first thought of a miscarriage when I read it.
    LoA

  4. A Life-Long Ache Begins Now [6-Word Story]

    Mrs. Robinson's Buddy Icon Mrs. Robinson

    Posted 2 months ago

    I noticed the title has six words also. coincidence, me thinks not! But for six word, what power!

  5. A Life-Long Ache Begins Now [6-Word Story]

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 2 months ago

    So sad =( But so powerfuly strong

  6. A Life-Long Ache Begins Now [6-Word Story]

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I was inspired to write a response to this. Hope you don’t mind.

  7. A Life-Long Ache Begins Now [6-Word Story]

    JacK Spicer!'s Buddy Icon JacK Spicer!

    Posted 2 months ago

    took me a min to get what u were tryin to say…sad :(

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