Exhilaration

by Never Explain

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She edged over to me, keeping a locked gaze on my eyes. Her coal black eyes were practically smoldering for something to happen.

I smiled just enough, just enough to mask my leaning in as well. Since i haven’t gotten any in a long while, I’m not exactly sure when to close my eyes, but I didn’t care, I could drag my gaze away from the darkness in her eyes that made me feel an exhilarating chill in my lungs.

“You know what I love?” Helena asked quietly.

I stopped leaning in to engage in the dirty talk with a biting notion to dive straight into her.

“What?” I breathing into her barely open mouth.

“The moment right before we start eating eachoth-”

I interrupted her phrase with my lips ramming into hers. She was so…Cold. I loved it. I felt my…everything grow smoldering hot and I felt her grow colder and colder as we sunk deeper and deeper into my bed’s warmth.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Exhilaration

    Never Explain's Buddy Icon Never Explain

    Posted 2 months ago

    Well, I know you all wanted it, even if I wasn’t going the way RWS was planning. ;]]

  2. Exhilaration

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 2 months ago

    WOW . I kinda wanted them to get together (dating people dating!) but I liked the way that RWS was playing it out. But I like this too (even though now they might not date…=(

  3. Exhilaration

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the cold/hot imagery. Very good. Can’t wait for the sequel!

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    OOOOO , it is was the way I wanted it. Now we can see the fangs.. lol.
    LoA

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