Why, No, I'm not God. Don't Be Ridiculous!

by Never Explain

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Natalie gave him an odd look, looked down and her eyes widened. Anthony looked down at the open air hanging under his feet.

Oh Sh- Anthony thought, but his thoughts where interrupted by a screeching, and a flicker in the elevator lights.

No, no, no, no, no!! Stop, stop, stop, STOP !!!! Anthony thought frantically.

Natalie jumped as the elevator walls bent outwardly and the light exploded. thank god there were no other people in the elevator.

DOWN ! A stronger voice emanated out of Anthony’s mind and Anthony dropped to his feet.

A more powerful side of Anthony took over. He spread his arms wide and his eyes rolled to the back on his head and the broken light turned on and the walls bent back in.

Natalie was stunned and, as Anthony came to, he looked at her.

“No, I’m not God, and you are not hallucinating.” He said. “I’m just another really unlucky guy.”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Why, No, I'm not God. Don't Be Ridiculous!

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 2 months ago

    Haha, nice one.
    “No, I’m not God, and you are not hallucinating.” He said. “I’m just another really unlucky guy.”
    Nice.
    LoA

  2. Why, No, I'm not God. Don't Be Ridiculous!

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 2 months ago

    The eyes rollig back thing? Yeah that would freak me out!!!

  3. Why, No, I'm not God. Don't Be Ridiculous!

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Sorry that took so long! I finally posted a sequel. Your turn! :-)
    LoA

  4. Why, No, I'm not God. Don't Be Ridiculous!

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Great visual for it all, just freaky enough to be really disturbing but not over the top.

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