The unfortunate situation

by Jackie Treehorn

He arrived in the office. The receptionist looked up from her catalog and chirped an ever-so-slightly forced salutation.

“Good morning, ummm, Mr. Smith. How are you today?”

Taken back, he muttered under his breath, “How do you think I’m doing?”. He held up his arm, wanting her to notice his dilemma.

“Oh my” she said. Her expression dimming once she caught sight of the arm. “I’ll let him know you’re here right away Mr. Smith”

He turned around and surveyed the small vestibule. Several people were seated, each with an empty chair between them. A curious man stood facing the corner.

After due consideration, the man chose the seat that he thought would offer him the least chance of interaction anyone else.

A moment later, he heard the click of a doorknob turning, and the sickening groan of hinges that have turned too many times.

“Mr. Smith, follow me please.”

He rose from his perch, carefully moving his arm to avoid contact with the woman next to him.

As he entered, the first thing he noticed was the…

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. The unfortunate situation

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 days ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it, all the elements of both interesting back story and potential for more mayhem or drama to follow. Excellent example of what ficlets is for.

  2. The unfortunate situation

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great and interesting open-ended story, but what was the first thing he noticed?

  3. The unfortunate situation

    Jackie Treehorn's Buddy Icon Jackie Treehorn

    Posted 4 days ago

    thebetweenspace,

    good question….you tell me ;)

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