most excellent direction….I smell a Blade Runner type angle, combined with a little bit of The Sixth Day.

Awesome verbage too, I wish I could find a reason to use the word ‘ennui’ every day

sorry, in trying to hit stars, went too low…

Futuristic sci-fi at its best. The company body bank? Fantastic and strange idea.

Must confess the idea isn’t entirely original. I think I read it in a comic book…somewhere. But I thought it fit what I was going for.

Nice one. I like how the accident becomes both less and more important at the same time in the final paragraph.

Clever and very witty! I really like it!