The Remarkable Yo-Yo

by Ax

The yo-yo arrived while his parents were at work, as he knew it would. That morning he’d kissed his mother on the cheek, waved good bye to his father, and headed out the door to the bus stop. At least that’s where they thought he was going.

In reality he’d walked out the door and hid under a bush in the front yard.

The unremarkable cardboard box was about the size of a fist. It bore no addresses. He slit the tape with his swiss army knife and pulled back the cardboard flaps, heart thudding in his ears. The boy lifted the yo-yo out of the box with the bubble wrap.

Eventually his best friend arrived wanting to know why he hadn’t been at school. The boy only smiled and offered the toy. His friend examined the carved Chinese dragon on the yo-yo and slipped the string on his finger. His face turned the color of snow and he began to shake. The yo-yo glowed red, like coals in a fire.

The boy watched his friend collapse, whither on the ground, and turn into a toad. He smiled and set the yo-yo back in its box.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Remarkable Yo-Yo

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 4 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great first ficlet! It’s got the same surreal / magical elves quality of the original prequel and sequel.
    LoA

  2. The Remarkable Yo-Yo

    Ridcully Calvert's Buddy Icon Ridcully Calvert

    Posted 4 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I really liked this. Very otherworldly

  3. The Remarkable Yo-Yo

    Wil Wheaton's Buddy Icon Wil Wheaton

    Posted 4 days ago

    Awesome.

  4. The Remarkable Yo-Yo

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 3 days ago

    Great addition to both the Prequels and Sequels, it really fit the style of both.

  5. The Remarkable Yo-Yo

    Ax's Buddy Icon Ax

    Posted 1 day ago

    I’m glad you guys liked it. Took a lot of editing to get it down to size…started out twice as long ;-)

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