A Tough Life (Invisible Challenge)

by OrangeOreos

And that’s when I saw them coming right for me!

BOOM !

The cactus in front of me exploded, and a small black bullet fell into the sand behind me.

“Faster! HYA !”

I focused in front of the stolen horse’s head. The stinging wind, peppered with grains of sand, made it difficult to focus.

The horse was living a nightmare. It’s eyes were wide, and spittle oozed out of its mouth and fell in big drops behind us.

I could hear the galloping horses’ hooves falling further behind over the whipping wind.

BOOM !

I felt the bag in my hand getting lighter.

I looked down to see a hole in the small velvet bag I had stolen from the sheriff’s station. Small gold and silver coins were cascading from the ripped bag.

I growled and kicked the poor horse harder into it’s sides, trying to grab whatever coins I could with my other hand.

“Come on!” I yelled. I dug my spurs deeper into the horse’s heaving flank.

Then I felt the ground heave upward, and I was flying through the air.

NEEEEEIGH !

Right into the sheriff’s path.

Comments

  1. A Tough Life (Invisible Challenge)

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 2 months ago

    uh-oh! what’s going to happen now?!

    i love how the bandit feels bad for the horse. i always do too, whenever i have to kick them in the side to make them speed up. :(

    great job, thanks for entering!
    LoA

  2. A Tough Life (Invisible Challenge)

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    duh duh duh, (doomsday notes, lower and lower) Oops, bad horsey, went straight toward sheriff! Maybe it was the sheriff’s horse….. Nice story, love the interruptions by the gun shots and the horse. It adds a lot in one word.

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