Now That You've Found "Perfect"

by Storykeeper of Fae

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Now that you’ve found “perfect,”
I feel as though you’ve left me.
Even though you said
That you never would forget me.

When you said, “I never want
To leave you,” did you mean,
“You’ll do until I find another.”?
Did you lie to me?

Were you truthful when you said
to me, “Until we die.”?
Or was it just your way with words?
Was it all a lie?

So will we ever speak again?
Will you find the time?
You drove me to the pen. Again!
And to another rhyme.

Why did you not tell me?
Share with me your joy?
Did you think I couldn’t handle it?
Oh, you stupid boy!

So now that you found “perfect.”
Tell me, kindred spirit, friend,
Do you no longer need me?
Does our friendship end?

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Now That You've Found "Perfect"

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 3 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this would make a cute song. i really like this.
    LoA

  2. Now That You've Found "Perfect"

    Lee Braiden's Buddy Icon Lee Braiden

    Posted 2 days ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this too. Very honest, vulnerable human questions, well expressed, but without too much self-pity. Good job :)

  3. Now That You've Found "Perfect"

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 days ago

    Lovely. Kind of left me guessing if it was a romance gone wrong or just that inevitable rift in friendships when romance blooms elsewhere. Either way you get that mix of angry but still an underlying affection for the person.

  4. Now That You've Found "Perfect"

    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 2 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Loved it, as I enjoy all the romantic things you write =) We must think alike on some level.

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