#220 and #221

by Will Hindmarch

“Not anymore, Herr Doctor,” she said. “And never again.” Behind her teeth brass cylinders rotated, clicking together to form the right shapes to transform the air from her bellows into words.

“How can you say that?” the Doctor asks. Behind his glasses his eyes are red and swollen.

“I cannot”—the cylinders catch and hiccup—”love, love you.” The Doctor reached out to her with his good hand and brushed her porcelain face. “I cannot—not, not—love you,” she said again.

Mortimer spoke up. “I’m sorry, Doctor.” He pulled a phonographic record, black and grooved, from the front of his apron. “Do you want try number 221?”

The Doctor put his plush-and-fabric hand to his eyes, scrubbed away tears. “I don’t know how many more of these I can handle today,” he said, taking the record and swapping it with the one on the back of her brass skull. He cranked up her insides, like the weights inside a grandfather clock, and fitted the needle against the new record.

“Good morning, my dear,” he said.

“Good morning, my love.”

Comments

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  1. #220 and #221

    Seth Miller's Buddy Icon Seth Miller

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Steampunk unrequited love. I loved it!

  2. #220 and #221

    agenda-b's Buddy Icon agenda-b

    Posted 2 months ago

    Well done, and intriguing.

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    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hee, i like, i like.
    five star rating yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    LoA

  4. #220 and #221

    Rusty Tanton's Buddy Icon Rusty Tanton

    Posted 2 months ago

    Here’s the part where I demonstrate a lack of geek cred: I had to look up what steampunk is.

    Now that I know what it is, this is pretty awesome.

  5. #220 and #221

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 2 months ago

    Really good descriptions (“Behind her teeth…bellows into words.”) and cool idea. Kind of reminds me of the Pygmalion myth.

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    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m not usually into steampunk BUT this piece rocks!

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