Unreality

by Tony Mannor

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Browncoatben's Buddy Icon Browncoatben

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Really set the scene nicely! Great work.

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    BMGelinas' Buddy Icon BMGelinas

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great continuation. I’m already thinking about the next installment.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    Good job telling of this guy’s life and how it’s morphed into something he didn’t expect. It could use a ‘mature’ tag though. Nothing really lurid, but we have a lot of kids running around the site.

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    good thing they pulled the curtain!

    Great scene and inner monologue!

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