Pretty Women

by paper flowers

Sir G is well enough to join his friends in the room. Abella eagerly goes to the door to let in the mystery person. She opens the door and reveals the most beautiful princess in all the land. She has long blonde hair, and shocking violet eyes that match her long dress.
“Hello friends, my name is Princess Eva,” she says in a sweet, singsong voice.
The three queens get up and introduce themselves, while the 3 sit there gawking at the girl. Quinn sneaks up behind them and wacks them on the head.
“Put your tongues back in your mouths,” she says.
“Well,” says Eva, “I just wanted to tell you that you are all welcome to join me and my family for a feast down by the water tonight.”
“That’d be lovely,” Aurora replies.
“Great, I’ll see you then,” Eva says showing her bright white teeth. Abella closes the door behind her.
“Seriously you guys, you’re so immature!” Quinn says.
The 3 ignore her, and continue staring at the door were the beautiful princess was. Then Sir Gavin speaks.
“I’d be her slurpee!”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Pretty Women

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    SWEENEY TODD SONG TITLE !

    Great ficlet, too, by the way.

    But…

    SWEENEY TODD SONG TITLE !

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    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 2 months ago

    Slurpee…

  3. Pretty Women

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 2 months ago

    Haha, I figured you’d notice OrangeOreos. :)
    LoA

  4. Pretty Women

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    Cute, in a storybook sort of way. Good job staying consistently in present tense.

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    Disturbed Youth's Buddy Icon Disturbed Youth

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    “i’ll be her slurpee!!!” lol!

    LoA

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    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 2 months ago

    LOL SLURPEE !!!!
    loved it.
    LoA

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