Losing Some Heat

by thebetweenspace

Add to AIMShare

“Wow, babe. That was awesome,” Britney said. “The bullet hit him right in the throat.”

“I’ve never shot a man before,” Jared admitted. “What a rush! I mean not like as good as heroine, but pretty incredible, really.”

“I know exactly what you mean. It’s like an orgasm, killing someone in cold blood. But I wonder how they found us,” Britney said, curiously. “And so quickly.”

“We should have grabbed the composite sketch. It’s getting way too hot up in here. I wonder if that pig wrote down our license plate number before I killed him. Keep your eyes open for more popos.”

“So, where are we going?” Britney asked.

“Definitely across state lines. It’ll take like eight hours to get to Vegas, but maybe we should get in a little more experience along the way.”

“You want to hit a few more banks today?”

“Yeah, we can hit Salinas, Bakersfield, and Lancaster along the way. But first, we’ve got to lose some heat.”

He pulled off the interstate and they ditched the car in an alley. “How does a new car sound, Brit?”

Prequels

Write a prequel

Sequels

Write a sequel

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Losing Some Heat

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 month ago

    This couple is getting more calus than Bonnie and Cldye , by the ficlet,your entry into the foray is most welcome,love the gritty dialogue between this cold couple.

  2. Losing Some Heat

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Disturbing casualness to their ventures further and further into the darkness of crime and violence. Well told.

  3. Losing Some Heat

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awesome.. I totoally love how you jumped right in there and wrote a flawless story totally fitting what was already done.. welcome to the series.. please stick around and join in the fun!

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!