Foreboding

by PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

My day, up to the point where I wanted to enter my locked, thumbprint and iris scan secured cubicle and found the door ajar, was filled with a sense of foreboding.

At 06:75 my alarm started blaring some newly discovered starlet’s first hit. I hoped it would be her last. I bashed the snooze button and managed to spill last nights dregs of synthohol onto the carpet The HoovaK sprang into action only do die with a whimper two seconds later. “Verfluchte Maschinenwirtschaft” I thought, now I’d have to fill in a requisition form in triplicate to get a new one. Sleep was no longer an option. I kicked the HoovaK, chipping my toenail in the process.

The MetroBots were out in full force, pointing their flashsticks at the masses as they filed past. “Most likely looking for contraband” my neighbor mumbled. Thank Corp I still had that ticket…” THE TICKET ” – I had left it at home! Too late now to get it. Acting nonchalant, I filed past and arrived at Corp Inc. just in time to see Ben drink the last of the coffee.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Foreboding

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Amazing the different directions a sequel or prequel can go – love it, great work here & I intend to write a prequel of my own, though I’m not sure it will be as good as this one. Bravo!

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