An Agent's Priority

by Ink_n_imp

Her chest is on fire, the world is blurred around the edges. It moves against her wishes. It breathes and twists and tears at her, but she pushes forward. Instinct is all she has now.

Later, when the drug they gave her wears off, she will finally have the presence of mind to congratulate herself on her daring escape. She will take stock of what she still has: shoes, shoe laces, socks, long pants, long sleeved shirt, underwear, under wire bra,elastic hair tie, two bobby pins, her glasses, a jacket, her health and her brain. Everything else was taken away.

She will administer to her wounds (inflicted both by man and nature) as she was taught to do. She will acknowledge she is lost deep in a woods she doesn’t know, but she will remain calm, orient herself to the cardinal directions, find and follow running water. She will survive to return to the Agency and give her report.

But right now, she is running for her life, and she’s half out of her mind.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. An Agent's Priority

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this. Always been a big fan of heroines, and this one seems like an especially interesting character. Great little sequence that leaves open plenty of possibilities for both sequels and prequels. Bravo!

  2. An Agent's Priority

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh, there is a typo in the first sentence though. I think you meant “Her chest is on fire” rather than “in on fire.”

  3. An Agent's Priority

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 17 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m also a big fan of heroines, having fancied myself to be one when I was little. (OK, fine maybe I still do sometimes…)
    This was tantalizing, just giving your reader enough information to have some idea of what’s going on but still wanting more. Excellent last line.

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