Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

by JLaughter

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Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You change tense in that third paragraph there. I think you meant “moved” instead of “move.” Other than that, I did enjoy this, especially the first line.

  2. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    Browncoatben's Buddy Icon Browncoatben

    Posted 3 months ago

    great visuals, little brother

  3. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 3 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    Thanks for the comments, and the edit there. It was “moved,” but me and the “d”-key were having a fight…something about me drinking too much and not working hard enough, I told it that it didn’t do the dishes enough…so it went to its mothers for the day. Silly d-key.

  4. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Fugue in d-minor? Androids always fascinated me.

  5. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The fugue in d-minor was a reference to the missing d in the first post. minus d -> d-minor

  6. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great story that really got me interested in the character.
    “Zeiss-Ikon eyes” I remember reading a story in Omni magazine years ago where the characters all wanted Zeiss-Ikon eyes. I don’t remember the name of the story but that reference has always stuck in my memory.

  7. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 3 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    Probably “Burning Chrome” by William Gibson. Very good short story.

  8. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Bingo! I don’t completely remember the details of it, just the memory that I really liked the story.

  9. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Interesting imagery here.

  10. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    i always threaten the d if it doesnt act right i’ll switch it with the squiggly line key that gets its attention, the squiggley line key is like the minor leagues for keys the d she be happy he is in the show.

  11. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 2 months ago

    Plenty of little hints dropped in here – and great imagery. You know, not that I know what getting high is like, but I would assume that it was well-described in this.

  12. Bagman: A Clear Blue Spike

    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 2 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    Suuuure you don’t, stovo!

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