Washed Brilliance, part 1

by Jamie Rose

My name is Sam Leylie, and I have come up with a brilliant plan to rule the world.
I am 11 years old, a certified genius, and, most suprisingly, I’m a girl.
I know, I know. When you think of a kid genius, you usually think of a little boy with a white lab coat on, concocting a strange, bubbling green potion in a labratory. In actuallity, the only boy genius I know that even owns a labratory lives in Utah.
Now you’re probably wondering what my brilliant world domination plan is. I would tell you, really I would, but I simply can’t. Why, you ask? Because of a washing machine. A washing machine and a pair of blue jeans.
My amazing plan came to me when I was sitting on a swing at my school playground at aproximately 11:43 AM. I was just sitting there when it hit me- BAM ! The most brilliant plan ever made by man kind (well, girl kind)! I immidately knew I had to write it down, but I had no paper. Asking my friend for some, she said she didn’t have any, but she knew that Jimmy B. did. I ran across the

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Washed Brilliance, part 1

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    This story seems to kind of ramble on. And ending mid-sentence really knocks points off. I’m interested in the blue jeans and the washing machine, so you’ve got an interesting story going here. It’s just… off? It’s missing a certain flow that I believe comes from possibly being rushed?

  2. Washed Brilliance, part 1

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Genius with a poor memory perhaps. I thought the whole girl genius idea was really cute!

  3. Washed Brilliance, part 1

    Jamie Rose's Buddy Icon Jamie Rose

    Posted 4 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Sorry about ending mid-sentence. i ran out of word space & (you were right) i didnt have time to write the sequel. But hopefully I’ll be able to post it soon.

  4. Washed Brilliance, part 1

    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted 4 months ago

    This is really good. I like it. Keep on going. I really want to hear more! Read my stories!

    LoA

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