Do whatever you want to do… “Marcy Delgatto.” That’s an awesome sequel.

I really like the narrator’s voice in this one, very matter-of-fact. And you wrote it in the character’s true voice with grammar flubs and all which adds more dimensions to that character.

Wouldn’t ya know it.. I have no idea what this story is about. And yet I enjoyed reading this story.. Looks like I will have some catching up to do.. This is a very intriguing story.

Here we go with those adolescent fantasies again. Great sequel.

Love the dialog exchange in the 1st & 2nd paragraphs! Unexpected humor with Chris’ line… Great 1st person writing too – very realistic and believable, Sir THX 0477 . Once again – a winner!