Even Prometheus Bled...

by BlakesOddAngle

Fire never held the interest for me,
Its dwindling life,
Its shallow, transparent little existence,
Always tied,
Its always been in the blood for me.
Deep and rich and thick,
Ancient and tainted,
Full of a million little bits we should never see,
Something evil,
Something you just shouldn’t see.
Nobody should know the colour of their own blood.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Even Prometheus Bled...

    Klapaucius' Buddy Icon Klapaucius

    Posted 4 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Quick bit of advice:

    It’s “Prometheus”.

    That is all.

  2. Even Prometheus Bled...

    BlakesOddAngle's Buddy Icon BlakesOddAngle

    Posted 4 months ago

    Thanks, couldn’t be bothered to look it up, titles a work in progress.

  3. Even Prometheus Bled...

    BlakesOddAngle's Buddy Icon BlakesOddAngle

    Posted 4 months ago

    Suggestions appreciated.

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