Disturbed {Ready Set Go- Lyrics Challenge}

by Jenunique

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Hannah Griff watched her patient as he was wheeled into the ward. “Bringing you another disturbing creation from the mind of one sick animal who can’t tell the difference and gets stupified,” announced the attendant.

Her heels click- clacking on the sterile tiles while she followed them. Snapping the order, “Take Mr. Smith to room five two nine.” The attendants exchange smirks and shrugs. Depositing Mr. Smith in a bright padded room, they left Hannah with him.

He pulled against the restraints. Dr. Griff absently set about checking the buckles. She turned with a practiced smile. His eyes met hers for the first time. One was blue, the other brown.

She felt mesmerized, so unprofessional. He let his head tilt to the left, never breaking the gaze, “Why do you like playing around with my narrow scope of reality?”

Though Hannah tried, she couldn’t break his stare, “I, can feel it all start slipping away.” Mr. Smith smiled. “Don’t you think it can take control. When I don’t let it, I get stupified.”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Disturbed {Ready Set Go- Lyrics Challenge}

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 4 months ago

    One of my many many “Disturbing” favorites. ;D
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=82-PLZ-bTm8&feature=user

  2. Disturbed {Ready Set Go- Lyrics Challenge}

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 4 months ago

    GREAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :)

  3. Disturbed {Ready Set Go- Lyrics Challenge}

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is a great use of the song. I absolutely love that you gave him different colored eyes, and the dog mannerism of turning his head. Very well written psycho you got here.
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    It reminds me of the first website I created back in 96 that was the journal entries of 6 different inmates in a psych ward. Your ficlet reminded me of that, and how it may work as a series here. Thank you for the inspiration.

  4. Disturbed {Ready Set Go- Lyrics Challenge}

    Lindsay's Buddy Icon Lindsay

    Posted 4 months ago

    Cool, I liked it. The lyrics really wrapped into the song well.

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