Jonas Part 45: The Girls Room

by LovingYourHeartbreak♥

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We all came crashing through the door at once. After checking under all the stalls for feet, we began our conversation.
B- “Why are they here?”
S- “I don’t know. But they are, like, a huge hit in this class.”
C- “Sam seems nice.”
Am- “Nobody related to the devil can be nice.”
Al- “She is pretty nice…”
[whispered to Amanda] “And you don’t really mean that.”
Amanda gave me a pleading look. Then, extremely quietly, shushed me as she pulled me out of there. The other three didn’t notice, they were too busy discussing Charlie and Sam.
B- “I really think we need to get into their circle.”
S- “We arree in their circle.”
B- “But like, one of us needs to get closer. We need to figure out who they really are.”
C- “I don’t know about you guys, but they really remind me of the Cullens from the Twilight series.”
B & S- “YEAH!”
B- “What if they are vampires?”
S- “Don’t be ridiculous!”
C- “She isn’t! THEY COULD BE ! What do we know about them anyway?”
This was the last I heard. Mandy & I made it outside.

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  1. Jonas Part 45: The Girls Room

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very intricate conversation you crafted here. I love the ending, gives a perfect sense of movement, or like moving on, like a chapter end in a book. Really great read.

  2. Jonas Part 45: The Girls Room

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 4 months ago

    tooolllldddd uuuuu!!!! VAMPIRES !

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