The Ex Strikes Back

by flute faerie

“Well, I wouldn’t say great. I would say… surprising,” Lilly said.
“Well, that was better than I expected,” Patrick mumbled.
“Anyways,” Brian said “Who’s ready for prom!”
Everyone cheered.
“This is gonna be the best prom ever,” Patrick said, eyeing Lilly.
“Yes, it will be,” Brian said, glaring at Patrick.
“Well personally, I can’t wait to get on the dance floor!” one of Brian’s friends said, breaking the ice.
With that,everybody started practicing their dance moves in the car. Thankfully, they got to the prom before it could get too embarassing. When they pulled into the parking lot, Brian held open the door for Lilly, and they walked in linking arms.
“This,” Lilly thought, “is going to be the best prom ever”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Ex Strikes Back

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Nice job using the repeated line for effect. Funny picturing all the teens in the limo doing the dance moves.

  2. The Ex Strikes Back

    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hehe i loveee itt. love it all. omg.

  3. The Ex Strikes Back

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    It is almost foreshadowing that something bad will happen by the repetitive best prom ever. This is going to be good.
    LoA

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