Return to the Castle in the Air

by kwatz

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Roland paused for a minute, staring at the closed door and contemplating the possibilities. It seemed reasonable, even probable now that Jacques had followed this same path two days earlier.

He turned back to the strongbox. Gathering his nerve, he pushed the fragile silver key into the over-large keyhole and turned, praying that it wouldn’t snap…

...and moved…

...somewhere else…

...in the rain.

Roland was standing in a downpour on the drawbridge of the castle. He had faint memories of a dusty storeroom in the dead of night, but the pale light emanating through the dark clouds above the far plains suggested that the sun had not yet conceded the day.

A heavily cloaked figure shuffled out of the guardhouse, holding a lantern aloft.

“Sir Roland?” it asked softly. “Oh, Sir Roland! It is you! You’ve returned!”

A name flashed through Roland’s memory. Jacques. He peered into the shadows of the figure’s cloak.

“Felipe?” Roland asked. The man beamed in response.

“Welcome home, Sir Roland,” he said.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Return to the Castle in the Air

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Now we’re really getting somewhere. Is Jacques and Felipe the same person? Is the life below the castle some sort of acid trip or temporal projection? We need answers man. You and pens need to start pumping out two of these a day, each, to satiate my growing appetite. =D

  2. Return to the Castle in the Air

    kwatz's Buddy Icon kwatz

    Posted about 1 month ago

    It amuses me that you imply that I have any idea of where this is going or what the answers are. :) Frankly, pens&feathers threw me for a loop with the sequel. But that’s the fun part.

  3. Return to the Castle in the Air

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I know exactly what you mean. As soon as I think I have a handle on where my series is going, someone goes and gives me something completely different. It’s an amazing process, and thinking ahead is actually detrimental to success it seems. If you get too set on one direction, then you’ll have a difficult time adapting to whatever your partner/s throw out.
    I didn’t mean to imply that you knew, I was being rhetorical. I’m very interested to see where you guys take this though.

  4. Return to the Castle in the Air

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted about 1 month ago

    Ooh, wow. All these twists and turns; I think I’m going to be sick. In a good way. Happy vomit.

  5. Return to the Castle in the Air

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 11 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I wasn’t expecting it to be a return home of sorts for the character, but it fits perfectly. I love what you did with this sequel.

  6. Return to the Castle in the Air

    RainDance's Buddy Icon RainDance

    Posted 7 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Happy vomit, yeah, me too…

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