I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge)

by Blusparrow

I am a thinker
I wonder whether he is boy of my dreams
I hear his voice and always look for him
I see his beautiful eyes when I close my eyes
I want him
I am a dreamer
~

I pretend I that he doesn’t phase me
I feel for him more then he knows
I touch his arm and wonder whether he feels anything
I worry whenever I see him with a girl
I cry for what I wish I had
I am the girl that is always their for him
~

I understand that he may not like me back
I say his name and smile
I dream of him constantly
I try to pretend like it is nothing
I hope we will be together some day
I am in love

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge)

    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is so…lovely. Great job Blu and thanks for entering!

  2. I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge)

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    very emotional poem. I wonder how true it is? Good job.

  3. I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge)

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awe, very cute Blu. I think many girls.. and maybe some guys, can relate to this.
    LoA

  4. I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge)

    Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3's Buddy Icon Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yeah. I picture two friends, a guy and girl, who are so close.
    As friends.
    But one of them wants more. It kind of reminds me of the song Teardrops on my Guitar.

  5. I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge)

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    God Blu, you’re unbelievable. I don’t know how you manage to keep up with like two series and still do all of my challenges. Thanks so so much and sorry I couldn’t get in your last challenge. I’ll do the next for sure. :]:]:]

  6. I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge)

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    OMGG . This is sooo totally me and you know it. This is am awesome poem type thingy and I am completley in love with it. I don’t know how you do this….. (refrencing to freedom’s 2nd comment) its unbelieveable!!

    :]]
    keep going… with everythingg.
    love yaa.

  7. I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge)

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    Posted 4 months ago

    Very nice poem. Kept with the format and yet made it your very own. Wonderful emotion.

  8. I am a Thinker (Freedom's Challenge)

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    Posted 4 months ago

    Wow This is amazing and yeah how do you manage? That’s incredible!

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