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1. Bagman: Live at the Scene

   JMSquire

   Posted 4 months ago

   

   The way you wrote the camera parts really gets across the erratic feeling of the scene, I could picture the entire thing. Really, really, neat.

2. Bagman: Live at the Scene

   JMSquire

   Posted 4 months ago

   

   The way you wrote the camera parts really gets across the erratic feeling of the scene, I could picture the entire thing. Really, really, neat.

3. Bagman: Live at the Scene

   Browncoatben

   Posted 4 months ago

   

   Great stuff! Love this perspective!

4. Bagman: Live at the Scene

   KevMullins

   Posted 4 months ago

   

   I agree with JM here. You really get the sense of chaos here.

5. Bagman: Live at the Scene

   Ana Cristina

   Posted 3 months ago

   

   Ditto their comments. As always, flawless pacing.

6. Bagman: Live at the Scene

   Mighty-Joe Young

   Posted 3 months ago

   

   hey i dont like the camera drones that puts the ‘safety last’ photographers like myself out of work

7. Bagman: Live at the Scene

   thebetweenspace

   Posted 3 months ago

   

   This is some intense stuff. Ditto on the pacing and the well-described camera portions. You can just see it in your mind.

8. Bagman: Live at the Scene

   JLaughter

   Posted 3 months ago

   Thanks guys/gals. I really enjoyed writing this piece as well, especially loved this perspective. So much, in fact, that I use it again later on in the series.

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