I Envy Chuck

by Krulltar

I was dialing 911 before Chuck hit the floor. My girlfriend Susan didn’t miss a beat, and was pounding on the bedroom door where Linda was getting dressed.

“I think Chuck is having a heart attack!” Susan hollered through the closed door.

In that split second, the bedroom door swung open, and there stood Linda wearing no more than a pair of panties, that might have looked sexy on a woman who wasn’t 80 lbs overweight. Susan stood there with a shocked look on her face as Linda pushed past her and fell over her dying husband.

Linda whispered into Chuck’s ear, and I saw a smile come across his face as he passed away. She continued lying there, sobbing and naked, holding his body until the paramedics arrived.

Things changed for me that night, and I never saw Susan after that. I avoided all her calls and e-mails. I knew I wanted something more. I wanted someone who loved me more than her own vanity. I wanted someone who would drop everything in the world if I was dying. I wanted what Chuck had.

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  1. I Envy Chuck

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Amusing story with heart, despite the cut (though a necessary one) on the fat chick. Great message and well pulled off.

  2. I Envy Chuck

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 4 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Thanks for the comment THX 0477 . ficlets are hard to pull off, since you have to draw a picture with such a small canvas.

  3. I Envy Chuck

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You painted a humorous and at the same time somewhat touching picture here. Nice moral to the story as well.

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