Swimming Into Deep Thoughts

by JamGrrl

Toby turned his head slightly, listening for new sounds, but he only heard the echo of dripping water. Pausing just a little longer to warm his toes on the rough, hot rock, he dived in search for food.

The water rushed past his slick skin. He flicked his feet every so often to turn, but mostly he kept his legs close, making a single fin of his body.

A tiny fish swam past, hardly worth his time, but Toby so wanted to return to that warm stone of the surface world. With a lurch, he lunged. His quarry never saw him.

Back on the stone, he felt the cool air dry him. He thought of the water world below, and the air world here. He wondered if there could be some other world, some other realm as different as water and air were from each other. He pondered his five senses, and wondered if there were more.

The hunger rose again, and Toby felt the air vibrate. Unseeing, he caught the bug in his mouth. As the cave echoed with the crunch, his sightless eyes reflected the possibilities of a newt’s imagination.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Swimming Into Deep Thoughts

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Cute, a ponderous newt. Nicely done so that it’s very rich in detail but all along could be anything…merman, good diver, amphibean sea nymph, or of course, a newt.

  2. Swimming Into Deep Thoughts

    JamGrrl's Buddy Icon JamGrrl

    Posted 6 months ago

    Thanks, THX . :)

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!