Natural Phenomenon

by Apostrophe

All of us were waiting for this moment. Lying on our backs on blankets, in the cool summer grass. The sky was illuminated in several different colors. It was the time of day when you could see the transition from day to night. The sun just set so there was a faint glow on the horizon. But above that, the sky was turning blue, with the first stars making their appearance.

Then out of nowhere, came this bright glowing ember, blazing across the sky. It streamed across the sky, as if it was thrown from the heavens. We watched its decent from the atmosphere. It was such an amazing sight.

All around us nobody said a word. The whole place was silent. We all sat there, as we witnessed this natural phenomenon. Most of us knew that this was a once in a lifetime thing. Comets are known to occur with that kind of infrequency. As long as I am alive, I will always remember the colors in the sky. It was such an unforgettable sight.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Natural Phenomenon

    M.Paul Regret's Buddy Icon M.Paul Regret

    Posted 3 months ago

    matches the picture perfectly.

  2. Natural Phenomenon

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it…sounds like something I’d like to witness. I love just watching the sky and stars…seeing a comet would be sweet!
    Nice story
    LoA

  3. Natural Phenomenon

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Clever description. But your title reads natrual instead of natural.

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