She jumped the gun, and he failed to hold her interest

by JMSquire

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  1. She jumped the gun, and he failed to hold her interest

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it.

  2. She jumped the gun, and he failed to hold her interest

    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That’s good stuff. I could never write a lick of poetry myself, although I do like poems. I’ve really got to respect a good poet, especially when I consider how much harder it must be to make a poem fit into 1024-character limits. Every word and punctuation mark is so important.
    Good piece, JM.

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